Has these mistakes I have made in freshman year done a lot of damage of me getting into a good college?

you are a very strange person. your grades are fine. But you have horrible grammar for getting good grades in english. If you write like that on your application you won't get into any school. Going to a good college doesn't really matter. It's all about who you know and what you do in school. Not your grades or your cles, but your leadership and ingenuity. Create something special that will leave a legacy behind. then you are truly successful.